this is my old one
its probably quite obvious as to why i ditched this
everything seems off to me, it just looks like i didn't put my all into the concept or anything. its very bland
i also have no idea where her nipple is AND this reference has been used before, and a lot better. i feel quite disappointed in myself after even making this, but oh well
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It's plain, but not so plain, in a unique way. It really depends on how you look at it, and your artistic way. Someone like me, who loves fashion, and a little obsessed with it.. i love this.
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yeah, i was going for quite a minimal approach. thanks!
Deletethat wording at the beginning reminds me of LDR's ride..?
ReplyDeleteI like the graphic, although it doesn't seem to have the other "effects" on it as you your usual graphics. But i seriously got to mention something about those shoes! Damn. all in all I am just a bitch who has somewhat to none graphic experience, who am I to judge?
have a great day.
oh my god i almost just spat out my lemon water. i know what you mean, i just dont feel anything from it. thank you! i like the shoes too, they took a while to draw
DeleteI like this but there are some things that I don't find nice.
ReplyDeleteThe fact that you have added an outline makes the graphic rather odd and the shading is darker than what you usually pick so at some parts it looks a bit like Lindsey's (Lovegossip4life) technique (as seen on the back and inner arm etc). And as you said yourself a nipple is missing.
To be honest, I still like this a lot but it has something that is not you: the outline.
i think its how i shaded it that makes an "outline" as it were. i see where you're coming from, i feel the same way, it's like i didn't even make it!
DeleteI enjoy the outline more than others.
ReplyDeletethank you! although it was entirely accidental
DeleteI really like the skin shading on this - outline included - and seeing as you've mentioned that this ref has been used before, it's also worth mentioning that I think you've done a better job with it. You've done the body somewhat differently and I think it's really well made, to the point where it's perhaps the focal point of the graphic: I'm not keen on the face or hair, the shoes are a bit blurry and the skirt too simplistic in comparison.
ReplyDeletePerhaps overall the graphic is too plain for my taste, but, departure from your usual style or not I honestly do love the body and think that, were it used in a more dramatic way, this pose would make a really beautiful graphic.
and okay wow I'll shut up now.
oh wow really? thank you! the skirt is a recolour, thats maybe why.
Deleteyeah, i feel like there's not enough there. thanks!
as seen as a spoiler for FEMME, Nika did a better job.
ReplyDeletehttp://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2uihlza&s=5 (December 19, 2011)
but i mean it's ok.
oh and the shadow behind the body looks cheap, add shadows under the shoes and body you can only have light from one direction. choose which direction that is.
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