For now, I'm gonna show you a half of the header for BEAST. Just finished it and I think it turned out pretty. I've tried out a new hair technique but I'm not sure about it ... I'm gone practice a little..
Well, it would be nice to hear your opinions and constructive critz ...
~J.C.
Sorry, but to me the hair just makes the graphic look a bit unappealing =S
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you've been working on it though.
Just be careful with your wrist shading though, try going for smaller details with layers than two thick lines of shade.
Thank you.
DeleteYes, I agree, I don't like the hair that much either :L
you've mad a rookie error with the leggings by making the base colour white (#ffffff) which is the lightest colour in existence therefore making it IMPOSSIBLE to highlight. try using a colour a few shades darker than pure white so you can highlight! without the highlighting the legs look very 2d
ReplyDeleteother than that i think you did a great job especially with the shading on the shoes!
Thank you for the feedback (:
DeleteI'll chose darker shades next time.
There is a way to make white look 3-D. You just have to shade a LOT:] But how you did it, it does look pretty flat. Still...That hand is pretty impressive. The shoulder/armpit area is also pretty good:]I love those boots:) And I can understand why you made the wrist like that because some people have more protruding bones in that area(depending on body weight), but it's a bit too exaggerated for the model. Good job though. I definitely can see improvement!
Deletethank you a lot for the feedback :)
DeleteI like the hair although there are some sharp parts(forehead). I also have to agree with Jack about the leggings.
ReplyDeleteAnd I think you should have added some dark shading to the top, not only light. It looks very nice overall and i love the lipstick and model!
I actually really like the leggings. I do agree with Jack, it does look a little 2D, but the design is really cute ;) I'd love to have a pair in real life! The hand shading is pretty good, though! Overall it could use work, but I still really like it!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much (:
DeleteI do think that the hand is the best part in this graphic.
I really like this, Although Jack and Lindsay are right about the leggings, But I love them and I love the rest of the graphic too. About the hair, I think its okay, maybe its a bit sharp but its nice :)
ReplyDeleteKisses,
Mary Ann
Thank you
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