Old Graphic

So this is a graphic I've made a while ago and it was supposed to be part of an editorial in the upcoming issue of FAME but then I decided to re-do the entire magazine since my techniques have changed a little.
So this is the graphic:

To be honest I don't like the graphic :L But I do like the hair even though it's a bit messy.
The pose is awkward ok o.o The shading seems okay but it's a bit too bright.. The dress is okay but for a photoshoot ... No. The should have been a little bit more complex or something..