The clothes and the skins are great, but i think you should practise your hair more :)
I think you should shade a bit differently the hair and shorts. Great overall!
The hands are pretty blocky, but I love the shading on the legs. The jewelry is also very nice and goes well with the outfit:) Try to study the shadows in a human body. It'll help with shading hair, skin, clothes, and facial features:)
Sorry I don't like the hair but I love everything else
I don't normally do hair like that, it was just to focus on the clothes :)
luv it jst becareful e bout dat neck becuz it loxs odd u is improvinq
i don't like it (:
The clothes are actually not that bad but the fingers, ring and hair probably need more work. And maybe more shading too.